Very short, but I knew that going in. Cute. The guys all calling dibs on Tania was creepy and Simon was right, what good does it do if every other guy is doing the same (assuming calling dibs does anything at all - and it doesn't).
There were some spelling errors - childless instead of childish. Not really that big of a deal, but it was annoying.
Simon almost calling and then hanging up was kind of amusing, but I almost expected Tania to be annoyed that he had her number when she hadn't given it to him. I get that they are in different grades, but they'd talked before, so I think she would have given him her number if he'd asked.